Wednesday, April 7, 2010

Another Try

Love has never seemed
funny to me, perhaps that’s
why Tankas seem sad
I’m willing to try again
both with this form and with you


~ J. D. Mackenzie


(inspired by napowrimo prompt #7 finding humor in love )

5 comments:

  1. I wish you luck in love and tanka :)

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  2. JDM,
    This is a very sweet poem.
    Pamela

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  3. Lovely tanka poem, well done :)

    Marinela x

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  4. I agree, well said and nicely written.

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