Our dream big list
included travel to exotic places
like most of the continents
and art collections
we couldn’t pronounce
When it came time to leave
we had the wrong luggage
not only did it not match
we’d packed all wrong
Hers was filled
with inter-generational curses
and needless clutter
making it difficult to lug
around temples in Thailand
or white beaches in Greece
Mine was lightweight
with blank journals craving ink
and room to bring things home
When our ferries went separate ways
I started to make her a scrapbook
it would be a sad reminder
of all that we missed
together
Seeing Lord Leighton’s Solitude
jolted me back
there were similarities
Sienna shades of brown
relaxed Victorian breasts
but this figure had
what my beloved lacked
an elusive solitude
her soul would not permit
That enduring image
seared in my mind forever
it was so unlike her
I never sent it on
~ J. D. Mackenzie
(inspired by napowrimo prompt #6 writing poetry from favourite images)
Cool poem - sears an image in the reader's mind too.
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ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading! Full of images and well done.
Pamela
Hers was filled
ReplyDeletewith inter-generational curses
and needless clutter
making it difficult to lug
around temples in Thailand
or white beaches in Greece
Very nioely done, JDM!
Whimsical and a tinge sad.Well done!
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