tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1464960186859672968.post3482521083788183157..comments2023-09-12T02:36:12.041-07:00Comments on the busy pen of JDM: Sweet William, Meet MarleneJ. D. Mackenziehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10188487574377344543noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1464960186859672968.post-30778956773200121812010-04-19T13:13:48.951-07:002010-04-19T13:13:48.951-07:00JD--This is a lot of fun. Love the cougar stanza-...JD--This is a lot of fun. Love the cougar stanza--the rack of lamb, odd yelping poodle, and the perjorative terms.Robinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02237296406471830840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1464960186859672968.post-78621395041415335972010-04-18T21:31:26.488-07:002010-04-18T21:31:26.488-07:00YES!
Love this.YES!<br /><br />Love this.Danhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10434158889970912596noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1464960186859672968.post-5741553430891954702010-04-18T21:21:07.854-07:002010-04-18T21:21:07.854-07:00I love how you give each cat such a distinct, visu...I love how you give each cat such a distinct, visual character. And I laughed out loud at the last lines. :0)Erin Davishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03428693832930474044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1464960186859672968.post-9583571346469675272010-04-18T20:14:07.315-07:002010-04-18T20:14:07.315-07:00There's a piece in the Marlene stanza where I ...There's a piece in the Marlene stanza where I start picturing the triathlete in place of the cougar-- and in my confused reading, the images were so fun! Nice work!Avnihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05569037549253287473noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1464960186859672968.post-8822428679096219322010-04-18T12:10:34.201-07:002010-04-18T12:10:34.201-07:00JDM,
I like this and I laughed at the part about t...JDM,<br />I like this and I laughed at the part about the cat flipping you off. Funny!<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.com